What's Wrong with Your Script Author: Anonymous Fork (0)

  • Protagonist
  • Antagonist
  • First ACT
  • Second ACT
  • Third ACT
  • Midpoint
  • feels flat
  • seems forced
  • reads melodramatic
  • posts a false issue
  • creats unwanted questions
  • is underwritten
  • is overwritten
  • you could milk it.
  • you can take it further.
  • you should jump straight to the point.
  • you can tone it down a bit.
  • you could spice things up a bit.
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